Saturday, 24 November 2012

Story Time...

Not so much a blog this time, just a scene for either a short story or a film or something, that popped into my head the other day... it looked pretty good in my head as I pictured it but not sure it converted to the written word very well... but you can be the judge of that =]

The Vixen:

Her right hand is wrapped about his throat, her thumb pressing lightly against his Adam’s apple and her fingers firmly pulling his face down to hers. Her left hand is pressed against his toned chest. He leans in to kiss her and she bites his bottom lip, hard.

CUT

His hand are entwined in her long red hair as he pulls her head back and his other hand fumbles at the buttons of her button down dress. His lips are on her throat. Her blue eyes are closed and her full pink lips are parted as she moans quietly.

CUT

She is pushing him into the dirt, straddling his chest, and kissing him hard on the mouth. His hands are wrapped around her thighs as he leans further into the kiss.

CUT

They are running through a forest, dashing in and about the trees and both wearing no clothes. The moonlight and stars lighting their path was highlighting their beautiful body’s with an eery glow. She looks over her shoulder and squeals in delight as his fingertips slide over her waist as he attempts to grab her and pull her backwards into his embrace. She dances away, swirling about in the air as she skips ahead, her arms held out and her hands twirling. Her hair billows around her and her eyes are wide and alight with the exhilaration of his chase.

CUT

He stumbles to a halt, “Wha-?” he mutters, but his throat sticks as the chills run down his spine. He takes a small step back, holding his hands out before him, and shakes his head, “This isn’t real,” he says quietly.

“Oh, but it is,” she said. The tall, slender woman was no longer a woman. Or at least she was not a human woman. Fur the colour of burnt orange, had erupted from her flesh and covered her entire body. Her teeth had grown sharp, her mouth and jaw elongated into a canine’s muzzle and her ears had lengthened and transformed into large pointed triangles. Her blue eyes had darkened to black orbs and claws had replaced her nails. Nine, long bushy white tipped tails had grown from the small of her back and were gently flicking and swaying behind her.

“What are you?” he asked, frozen to the spot with fear as the human-fox grinned, revealing a mouth full of deadly looking white fangs.

“Some call me Kitsune, others Kumiho – I simply prefer… the vixen,” she snarled, a deadly guttural noise that made the man jump and shrink backwards, holding his hands in front of his face.

“Please…” he whimpered, but that just made her laugh.

“I just love it when they squirm,” she chortled as the man fell to his knees with a sob, wrapped his arms around his head. The Vixen strode over to him and ran a sharp black claw over his bare flesh and then kicked him hard onto his back and leapt onto his chest. Straddling him once again she pressed her front paws to his wrists into the ground so he couldn’t resist. As the tears fell from his eyes and his body quivered, she looked into his eyes and smiled once again, “I have been looking forward to this for a long time,” she breathed in his ear.

And then in a flash of orange and white, her teeth ripped out his throat and thick, warm blood filled her mouth. Her laughter filled the night air as she devoured the flesh and soul of the man that loved her.

*

So... 

It is so annoying because the scene plays out so well in my head but translating it into words is so difficult. I wanted to take this scene further, more detailed... maybe slightly longer... but this brief, badly written short snippet took me two nights to complete! So doing it well would take weeks, and it wouldn't be worth it really. 

I'm planning a happy blog soon, so keep your eyes open =] 

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